Writing Assignment

During the language class we were asked to write a text that should be called "A Frightening Experience" with  some special requirements:

1)Charts on narrative writing (exam tips)
2)Chart on vocabulary ( Brainstorming)
3)In our piece of writing, we had to include and underline the following:

a) Connectors: Result/Consequence
                        Addition of information
                        Contrast
                        Reason

b)Sequence Markers: First, then, later, after that,until, finally

c)Direct Speech (dialogues)
d)Rhetorical Questions
e)Adjectives
F)Tenses: Simple past: Past continuous and Past Perfect, Simple and Continuous
G)Use all the vocabulary in the chart
H)Past Continuous
I)Connectors

 A Frightening Experience

Last night, at 3:20 am,while I was alone in my house, something weird was happening upstairs. I heard noises coming from there, They weren't common noises, they were mysterious and terrible. I felt paranoid, as if someone wanted to hurt me. My bedroom was on the second floor, and I was frightened of going up. Later, at 4 am I was sleepy and I decided to go up and asked my self "what is going to happen? What can those strange noises be?" I took courage, got a knife and went upstairs. While i was going up, the noise came louder . I was walking fearless. However,  in the inside I was dying of fear.

 Now, I was on the second floor and I realised that something was moving in my room, it was a shadow behind the door. I felt insecure of getting inside my room as I didn't know what was going to happen. The door opened inmediately alone. I took a deep breath and went in. The door closed behind me. There wasn't anyone I could see. I raised my head and saw a malicious and scuffy creature, he went down and stood up in front of me. I was terrified, I was like a rock, I couldn't move until he said
"Let the game begin"
Who who are you?- I said stammeringly.
-It's better for you to start running- said with an arrogant voice. Without doubting it I rushed away searching for something that would save me. Fortunately his hands couldn't move faster even than a turtle. When I got to know where I was, I was already looking at the floor and I felt something grabbing my leg while saying:
"No choice, we will play" and then I realised I had no way out.